Documentary improvements

After our first edit of our documentary we had shown it to our teacher, who helped us agree on some improvements which we need to make in order to make our documentary seem more like a documentary. these improvements included:

• Editing the interviews into sections during the documentary instead of having it all in one go


• cutting pat of the tescos shot as it is too long and doesn't add to the documentary


• getting rid of some of the credits at the end as they are not necessary


• cutting the opening of the documentary during the archive footage but keep the section when the deal is made, including shaking hands


• add still shots and other archive photos from newspapers, Internet articles pictures, using transitions